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17 January 2008 @ 01:05 am
{fic} on a magic carpet ride (yoomin, side jaeho) [pg-13]  
Oh man. Here I go~ but! No excuses, my lovelies. *grins* This is result of, well, you guys will figure it out the reason if you finish reading the story. XD;;
I do consider this crack if only because I know some of you will want to kick me if I try to take this story seriously 8D;;, so be warned!
Oh, and any inconsistencies are totally my fault. My research was poor and little. x3

Author: Amy
Title: on a magic carpet ride
Pairing: YooChun/ChangMin, side JaeJoong/YunHo
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3.621
Form: One-shot
Content: (totally) AU
Genre: humor, romance
Disclaimer: This story does not portray actual events, nor is based on reality. It is not factual, only fiction. (well, obviously! *snorts*)
Warnings: Dedicated to [info]machine_of_july (cause she poked me like whoa) and everyone that likes YooMin. :D
Summary: Oh, how long does it take for a boy to figure things out, anyway?




.on a magic carpet ride.

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As many times as he thinks this over, he really can't understand. He tried different angles of approach, tried unusual (for him, at least) methods of research, even tried asking his friends for advice - which he knew was a mistake as soon as the words were out of his mouth. He ended up enduring a week's worth of teasing comments and shared knowing smirks that went right over his head. But now he's terribly frustrated over the whole ordeal, and he can't be bothered to try and work things out on his own anymore, so he does what he should have done from the start - he goes to the source.

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"You know what, I think you're trying to rationalize something extremely simple, my dear ChangMin."

The amused voice does nothing to help the scowl off his face, and he turns narrowed eyes to the boy in front of him.

"Don't patronize me, YooChun. All I'm asking is why. And believe me when I say, it's not an easy question to answer, concerning whom I'm dealing with." He gives a slight sniff - how dare the other treat him as a child? As if he didn't get that sort of attitude enough!

"Ouch." YooChun brings a hand to his chest and makes a mock-hurt face. "Right to the core, I see." With an easy smile, he turns to look to the window on his right. The motion seems casual, but to an attentive observer, there's a sudden tension on his posture.

ChangMin - hawk eyes that he seems to have - catches the change but gets not why YooChun would be tense. He tilts his head to the side, turning things inside his mind. "Just tell me why, YooChun. You sent me flowers and I'm nowhere near close to understanding why you did so. Are you trying to mock me?" ChangMin narrows his eyes even further - if that's the case, obviously YooChun needs to be reminded of whom he's dealing with.

Still looking outside, YooChun laughs. "Of course not." He turns and catches ChangMin's gaze. "I'm an easy and simple-minded guy. But-" he smirks a little, and his features change to amusement, "-just so you don't think I haven't earned the right to be in the house I'm in, I'll leave you to figure it out on your own."

His school robes flair out behind him as he walks out the door, and ChangMin almost gapes at him - damn those Slytherins.

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Frustrated beyond belief, but unable to let things go as is his wont, ChangMin skips his last class of the day (as much as it pains him, it's Arithmancy after all) and searches for JaeJoong. He's YooChun's best friend anyway, he might shine some light on the yet unresolved matter.

He finds the boy on his usual spot, an out of the way unused classroom that manages, at the same time, to be on the second and fourth floor. ChangMin once tried to figure that out, but gave up - another frustration - as some magic can be confusing even for a boy like him. Something about accidents and unseen consequences of once trying to change the Hogwarts layout was the simplest explanation he could come up with.

JaeJoong sits with his back to the wall, one leg spread out in front of him, the other close to his body, one arm propped on it. His robes and tie are a bundle on the ground and he watches the ceiling with intense concentration, a cigarette dangling from his fingers, forgotten. ChangMin rolls his eyes seeing that, but figures it best not to say a thing if he wants the boy's cooperation - plus, YunHo will eat JaeJoong's liver if he finds out, something ChangMin knows well, and that might happen by form of an anonymous note sent by a school owl.

Of course, ChangMin smirks, only if JaeJoong doesn't collaborate.

Stopping in front of the boy, ChangMin crouches down to JaeJoong's level, and only them the other realizes who's in front of him. Turning his eyes from the ceiling - another magical feature, only this one made by JaeJoong himself and charmed to show the Quidditch pitch - JaeJoong gives ChangMin a curious glance, made even more pronounced after he quickly casts a spell to show the time.

"You're skipping class, changMin?" He asks, with an amazed voice. "Something must be seriously wrong." JaeJoong gives the other a grin. "If it's mischief, can I help?"

ChangMin almost snorts, but restrains himself and merely gives the other a long look. "Of course." He says slowly. "As soon as you stop perving on your boyfriend by enchanting walls to show him during his Quidditch practice."

JaeJoong scowls and, suddenly remembering the cigarette and taking a drag from it, blows out the smoke on ChangMin's face. "Did you come here just to piss me off, genius boy?"

ChangMin coughs, and wonders, once more, why he's friend with this particular boy - he can be so childish, really! He feels vindicated though, knowing he's got the advantage here. "Come of it, JaeJoong. I have a question and I think you might have the answer." ChangMin gives the other a piercing gaze. "Why would YooChun send me flowers?"

After a long silent moment in which neither move, JaeJoong raises and eyebrow. "I take it back. You're no genius. Are you sure that's a legitimate question, ChangMin? You're having me on, right?", he asks in a suspicious voice.

Not managing to disguise his pout, ChangMin sulks. "Of course not. I don't joke about things I don't know. And I wouldn't ask if I already knew the answer, obviously."

An amused sound escapes JaeJoong's throat, and suddenly the boy is bent over his body, laughing out of control. He loses it so much that the already wavering image on the ceiling blinks off and still he doesn't stop. A good couple of minutes go by like that, until ChangMin can't stand being made fun of anymore and stands up to walk away.

JaeJoong stops then, and with a small smirk throws the butt of the - now spent - cigarette at the back of ChangMin's head, hitting him right in the middle of it. The boy turns around to yell at him - ChangMin keeps reminding himself he is the superior here, the one with potential blackmail material - just to be confronted with the sight of a smiling JaeJoong and losing all train of thoughts.

Getting up as well, JaeJoong dust himself off, and after gathering his clothes from the floor, he amusedly looks at ChangMin again. "You're such a silly boy sometimes, ChangMin. You know the answer to that question already, you're just in denial."

JaeJoong again laughs at ChangMin's outraged face, and just as the boy is working up to a full rant, he speaks again. "Just don't be in denial forever, okay? You might be losing on a good thing." JaeJoong pats ChangMin on the shoulder as he walks by him, and the un-amused face of the boy brings back the smirk to his own face. As he nears the door though, he turns around in a huff, expression completely changed. "Oh, but don't go thinking that your cute, clueless behavior will get you out of my shit-list if you so much as speak to YunHo about my nasty Muggle habit, capisce?" JaeJoong narrows his eyes at ChangMin. "Not a word, genius boy!"

As another one walks away from him, ChangMin lets out an annoyed sound. Damn these Slytherins and their half-assed answers and their need to have the last word!

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Still unwilling to let matters lay ChangMin contemplates the situation. He snorts, and lets his body fall to the bed. Damn, but dinner was a pain. YooChun and JaeJoong kept giving him those knowing smirks and it was just beyond annoying. He knows now the biggest flaw in his plan was asking those two about it. Of course they wouldn't give him a straight answer.

Tomorrow though, he knows just the guy to go to. As he covers his mouth with a tired movement of a hand, he's sure tomorrow he'll discover once and for all the reason why YooChun would send him flowers, even if it costs him his monthly allowance in sweets!

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ChangMin doesn't understand the appeal of soccer, and waking up an hour earlier than usual is almost too much trouble. He manages somehow to do so though, even as a slight bad mood lingers after he showers and eat - surely a left over from one too many confusing dreams and the memory of yesterday's frustrating conversations.

It's worked up to a complete foul mood by the time he reaches the outside of the castle and finds JunSu playing a game with the other Muggle-borns. He really doesn't get what's so much fun about the silly sport, being only a half-blood himself and raised completely immersed in the Wizarding Society. He knows about Muggle costumes and habits, but such things never brought him anything more than a passing interest, so he never researched deeply about them.

He studies the players with an irritated look and sits on the bleachers to wait for the end of the game. He remembers first when he met JunSu, and then later when YooChun and JaeJoong met him. He always thought they'd have a hard time accepting him, both being pureblood and from fairly old - and prejudiced - families, but they took a liking to the boy immediately, sometimes teasing the boy as it's in their nature, but not ever being outright mean to him. Once, catching JaeJoong in an exceptionally good mood, he asked for a reason to that behavior and got a most interesting answer - apparently, JunSu is just too cute to hate. Unbidden, an small smile blossoms on ChangMin's face at that thought memory. It had left him speechless then, but happy that his friends were getting along well.

Of course, the boy thinks amusedly, JunSu is terrible cute, and sweet. But oh, he does too have a big mischievous streak. Which is why ChangMin came prepared with an enormous bag of sweets that is now resting by his side.

The sound of the game ending interrupts his thoughts and ChangMin spots JunSu already making his way towards him. As he gets close to ChangMin, without even a proper hello, he immediately starts searching inside the bag for a Chocolate Frog. JunSu makes a happy sound when he finds it, and looks up gratefully at ChangMin, sitting by his side. "To what do I own this pleasure of your company so early in the morning?" He grins at the other boy, wiggling his eyebrows in emphasis. "You're finally here to ask me about the flowers?"

ChangMin's bad mood returns with a vengeance then, and with a hiss of annoyance he slaps his forehead. "Did those bloody Slytherins come spread lies to you about it already?"

Pausing mid-way into a bite and almost losing the Chocolate Frog in the process - the body of the sweet still eerily moving without a head - Junsu shoots ChangMin a concerned look. "No." He looks pensive for a second, than shakes his head. "No, they didn't come looking for me. The last time I spoke with them was yesterday during dinner. Same as you, no?"

An unhappy frown settles on his face and ChangMin suspiciously asks, "So how do you know about the flowers?"

JunSu lets out a little giggly, and if it weren't so endearing, ChangMin would've told him off for it - it's not a manly behavior at all! "Like the whole school doesn't already know about it, ChangMin? Everyone saw the owl delivering them." He munches on the chocolate a bit more until it stops moving completely. "Lunch is always the time the Hall is most crowd, and well, news travel fast around here." He turns his head to the side, watching the other players still around the area, completely missing ChangMin's narrowing gaze. "There's even a poll going on, hm. How long will it take for you to finally get it."

When JunSu finally catches ChangMin's darkening expression and see the hand already tightly gripping a wand, he hastens to explain. "Or some such silly thing. Really-" he adds, "-it's nothing to be upset about!"

With extreme control he didn't even know he possessed, ChangMin calmly gets up from the bench, and gives JunSu a tight smile, which really only comes off as a grimace. "And do you know who started this silly poll, JunSu?"

"Well." Biting his lip in worry, JunSu quietly answers, "I'm not sure. You know how these things are." Forgetting all about sweets, he too gets up and grips one of ChangMin's fisted hands in both of his. "ChangMin..." He starts waveringly, but continues bravely, once he catches the boy's gazes, "You're so very smart, I know, and you don't usually need advice from me, even though I'm older than you, but listen to me this once, okay?"

Quietly, ChangMin lowers his head, eyes falling to the ground - listening but keeping to his own stubborn ways.

"I know you want to figure it out on your own, so I'll just say this: don't let your own prejudices stop you from seeing what is right in front of your nose." JunSu chuckles when ChangMin looks up, affronted and already with a reply on the tip of his tongue. "No arguing with me, ChangMin. Remember you came to ask my opinion, hm."

ChanMing tilts his head to the side, a deep sigh escaping his lips. He pulls his hand to himself, and crosses his arms, still upset - but not quite so much. JunSu's presence always has that cheering effect on him. "So what you're saying is that I'm looking for answers I already have?"

Intently looking at the boy for a minute, JunSu smiles. "If you want to put it that way, yes. And-" turning his back to the boy and searching inside the bag once more, he takes out a Blood Lollipop and gives it to ChangMin. "-don't forget that gifts are symbols. Like you bringing me sweets."

Beaming, JunSu closes the bag, and starts making his way once more to the pitch where he can see some of his friends calling to him. "And sharing is caring too!" He lets out a giggle when ChangMin rolls his eyes. "Don't forget to reciprocate, ChangMin!"

Looking up to the sky, ChangMin's expression of long suffering goes unnoticed. He throws his arms to the sky, and starts walking back to the castle, silently asking why JunSu's friendly Hufflepuff nature has to be so clichéd.

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ChangMin doesn't manage to take two steps inside the door, when he sees all the students mingling about turn to him and stare. For a couple of seconds that's all they do, and then they are whispering to each other, and there's a uncomfortable buzz ringing in ChangMin's ears. He scowls, crosses his arms once more in a defensive posture and quicken his steps until he's climbed already three flights of stairs and there's no one else around.

He looks around suspiciously for a moment and then with a loud sigh sits heavily on the steps. Pulling his knees to himself, ChangMin lets his head fall down and rest on top of them as another deep sigh escapes his lips.

That is how YunHo finds him a few minutes later - in such a depressive position.

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"Ah! So there you are! I've been looking everywhere for you!" The sudden voice is a bit startling, but ChangMin doesn't let it show. Slowly, he lifts his head to find YunHo in front of him, an enormous grin on his face that immediately falls at ChangMin's blank stare.

A concerned frown appears on YunHo's face as he settles beside ChangMin. Worried about his state of mind, he lightly rests his hand on ChangMin's shoulder. The other boy continues to stare forward, seemingly not paying attention to anything, and carefully YunHo asks, "Is this by any chance related to the Flowers Incident?" By the sudden tensing of ChangMin's frame he's sure that is the case.

YunHo crosses his arms then, assuming a rigid posture, and resignedly thinks why must it be him always the one to deal with these situations. Not a few seconds after that, ChangMin is the one with both hands on his shoulder, shaking YunHo's whole body with almost too much violence.

"I just don't understand why in Merlin's name he's sending me flowers! I can't stop thinking about him now and I know he's a Slytherin and that you just can't trust that lot, but why would he be doing something like this and-", with a harsh last shake ChangMin lets YunHo go, only to quickly grab his own hair in two fistfuls, "-I just don't fucking understand!"

Both of YunHo's eyebrows raise when he hears ChangMin curse, and for one fleeting moment he's too cursing YooChun inside his own head, but then it looks like the boy's about to cry in frustration and YunHo has more pressing matters to take care of. Slowly, he takes ChangMin's hands from his hair and the boy, emotionally exhausted, let's him. Drawing ChangMin into an embrace, YunHo teasingly asks, "You do know I'm dating one of those Slytherins myself, hm, ChangMin?"

When that fails to prompt a response from the boy, YunHo lets a resigned sigh escape his lips and pulls ChangMin's face up, forcefully catching the boy's gaze with his own. "Enough with the pity party. If you need advice, I'm probably the one you should be asking for anyway. You should have looked for me in the first place, you know that, right?"

A meek nod is all ChangMin gives, unable to do anything more in face of YunHo's serious stare. He lowers his eyes to the ground and waits for the unavoidably chewing he'll receive. After a few tense moments - waiting was never ChangMin's thing - he looks up again, only to find YunHo smiling gently at him.

"Come on, ChangMin. I'm not going to scold you. That would be a bit hypocrite of me, no?" And then ChangMin remembers when YunHo and JaeJoong first started their relationship, how similar to the situation he finds himself in now it was, how YunHo completely freaked out and it took JaeJoong forever to convince the boy he was serious about his interest in him.

ChangMin's eyes widen in sudden realization. What a fool he was making himself to be not seeing thing as what they really were! All this time thinking it was a prank when it was quite possible YooChun was really only interested in him.

Quickly getting up and making his way downstairs, ChangMin turns back for only a second to thank YunHo. He catches YunHo shouted "You're welcome, brat!" and satisfied smirk, connecting that to JaeJoong obvious influence over the boy - but really, at least there was something to be said about a Gryffindor’s honesty.

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Finding YooChun takes some work, and ChangMin's almost giving up for the day when he stumbles upon the other boy quietly talking to JaeJoong just outside one of the classroom's door. He freezes and JaeJoong sees him first. The boy whispers something against YooChun's ears, and smirking at ChangMin, turns his back and make his way down the hall to what ChangMin knows to be the Slytherins' dormitory.

Lost in a flashback for a moment, remembering how eerily alike in behavior YunHo and JaeJoong were turning to be, ChangMin only realizes he's alone with YooChun when the other chuckles and starts heading in his direction. Suddenly worried, ChangMin backs a few steps until he can no more, his body connecting with the wall and making a muffled sound.

The smirk on YooChun's face looks completely different from YunHo's and JaeJoong's, ChangMin thinks, but then it turns into a satisfied grin, and YooChun's arms close around his body, and ChangMin stops thinking altogether. YooChun presses him against the wall and kisses him lightly at first. He rests his lips on ChangMin's for a few seconds, giving the boy ample opportunity to flee, before he turns the kiss more serious. Gasping, ChangMin lets YooChun do as he wishes and tries to reciprocate as best as he knows how to.

When they part - and sanity returns to ChangMin's mind - he sighs against YooChun's neck, and stops the boy before he even opens his mouth, putting any fears to rest. "I'm a bloody fool, I know. And no need to ask, but yeah, I'm willing to give this a go."

YooChun's only response is another chuckle and a whispered "Good" before he kisses ChangMin again.

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They spend the good part of an hour like that, ChangMin realizes, when his stomachs makes a loud noise and they are forced to separate. He casts a quick spell to show the time only to discover that dinner hour has long past.

YooChun eyes him speculatively and ChangMin makes smiles sheepishly before saying, "If you had given me chocolates instead of flowers we wouldn't even be in this situation."

Amused, YooChun takes one of ChangMin's hand and asks "Is that so, now? And why would that be?" and the boy grins, letting YooChun play with his fingers. "Because the way to a boy's heart is obviously through his stomach! And that-" he pokes YooChun on his side, smirking himself for the first time when other boy yelps, and continues, "-is why I'm the Ravenclaw here."

And never mind that he wasn't even smart enough to figure out YooChun's interest on his own.

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/the end.


DEATH THREATS NAO? 8D
 
 
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wednesday childe[info]wedschilde on January 17th, 2008 03:36 am (UTC)
do you know how much i love you!? ::::hugs::: heh.. .and ah, the min min! snookies.
Amy: ChangMin - Ruler[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 04:01 am (UTC)
it couldn't possible be more than how much i love you~ ;D ♥

min was quite confused by the whole flowers ~issue~ haha. XD
(no subject) - [info]wedschilde on January 17th, 2008 04:05 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 04:20 am (UTC)
feyla[info]feyla on January 17th, 2008 03:51 am (UTC)
HP!DBSK

that was quite funny. At first I was wondering what the heck was going on, but then I got it after a minute. Jaejoong's snarkyness in this had to be my favorite, but Changmin trying so hard to figure everything out was good too. And the House assignments were rather interesting too. Makes me wonder where I would place them myself.
Amy: DBSK/TVXQ - The Dongbang Way[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 04:03 am (UTC)
indeed! XD thus, crack. hahaha.

glad you liked it, bb. i have to admit i enjoyed making jaejoong a slytherin quite a lot. XD and truthfully, yoochun was the one giving me trouble with house placement, but, i think he turned out that bit slytherin too, no? ;3 (and of course i had to make yunho a gryffindor. my favorite person, in my favorite house~ 8D)
like snapple, only better.: changmin ; got a thing goin' on[info]applesu on January 17th, 2008 04:45 am (UTC)
omg how adorable is this?♥ i've been wondering about YooMin recently. i don't normally read them but their dynamic interests me and EEE i love your Changmin :DDD and sorry bb, but my Susu bias did a little dance of joy at how utterly cute he is here!

*squishes you and the YooMin and the world in general*

:D♥
Amy: JunSu - 4pics[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 05:04 am (UTC)
oh! i'm happy you decided to give my version of yoomin a try~! (they can be cute together, no?) *does a little dance* and you liked it, so i'm all yayayayayay! XD ♥

and i'll have you know, susu was adorable to work with here. i wrote his whole scene very fluidly. guess he liked his part too! ;D

*glomps* ♥
vrilly :) 브릴리[info]vrilly on January 17th, 2008 04:51 am (UTC)
OH MAN.
♥ harry potter-styled tvxq is so much love.
how could changmin be so stupid, goodness.
♥ love you girl. i need to study nihongo so see you again maybe later.;)
Amy: ChangMin - Ruler[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 05:06 am (UTC)
you liiiiike? 8DDD happy, happy! *bounces* ♥

changmin was quite ~in denial~ as jae said. but he saw the light by the end, even if he continued in denial, somewhat. XD

oh bb, lu2! good luck on your studies~ ♥
(no subject) - [info]vrilly on January 17th, 2008 08:58 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 09:24 pm (UTC)
junsu_hyung: changmin[info]junsu_hyung on January 17th, 2008 05:05 am (UTC)
This is so awesome! I love it! Ravenclaw is my favorite and you made gorgeous Changmin one!

*hugs*

I love you! ♥♥♥
Amy: ChangMin - Ponytail[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 05:11 am (UTC)
oh~ thank you very much! ♥ i'm happy you enjoyed the story!

isn't ravenclaw just right for changmin? XD i couldn't possibly place him anywhere else~
(no subject) - [info]junsu_hyung on January 17th, 2008 11:52 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 12:06 am (UTC)
The Machine: Min Demon[info]machine_of_july on January 17th, 2008 05:49 am (UTC)
"His school robes flair out behind him as he walks out the door," - AHSAKJSHAJDHAH WTF IS THIS - "and ChangMin almost gapes at him - damn those Slytherins." OMFG DAMN YOU WOMAN. DAMN YOU DAMN YOU XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I KNEW YOU COULD NOT BE TRUSTED!!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *rolls into a bucket*

Everything aside, this fic was bloodly brilliant! (English accent à la Ron and all XDDDD *bricked*) Changmiiiiiin wai so stoopid!? Hahahaha, oh dear. I think the beginning seriously killed me, and I was like wtf why is Min putting on airs, and wtf is Chun talking about being in a house for. How did I not figure this out earlierrrrrr youuuuuuuu!!!

And wtf Sly!Chun. I'll excuse this transgression for the sake of sneaky!Chun and all. but omgyes JaeHo Slytherin/Gryffindor relationship OTPPPPPPPPP ♥♥♥

This was such a fun read! Ahahaha, too cute! I LOVE it Mabi~~ Totally worth the wait X3333





I can has H/D!JaeHo nao?? *shot, calls in Hoshi for backup*
Amy: YooMin[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 06:16 am (UTC)
zomg, see? i had to be sneaky tooo~ if i gave too much away right at the beginning it wouldn't have been half as fun, ne!!! XDDD

*puts on her own slytherin!robes* (and never mind that i prefer gryffindor, it just doesn't suit me, ahahaha)

...did you imagine yoochun in another house?? boy gave me so much trouble, i swear, he didn't want to be sorted at all. D: (but then i though, wth, he's jae's BFF, and jae shan't be nothing else but slytherin so chun will have to be too! although huflepuff!su = just right, y/y? 8DDD)

and of course jaeho~ nothing else for them but house rivalry (and yunho being oh-so-uke with his freaking out, mwahaha. >D). opt, bb. they are the harry/draco of a better era, i say. ♥

you mean, prequel? *whimpers & keeps hoshi away* don't do this to meeeee~
(no subject) - [info]machine_of_july on January 17th, 2008 09:38 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 11:37 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]yaoi_hoshi on January 17th, 2008 06:51 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 07:02 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]yaoi_hoshi on January 17th, 2008 07:20 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 07:29 am (UTC)
Hoshi // Simona: Jae_Hot[info]yaoi_hoshi on January 17th, 2008 06:47 am (UTC)
LOL MABI ILUUUUUUUSM ♥♥♥♥♥

HP!DBSK...I totally read the comments first so I knew it was coming (but from the title I thought it was something Aladdin-ish, wtf XDDD), but seriously. That was brilliant. XD♥♥♥

And no, after reading this I don't think I'll kill you. Because there's YooMin and ZOMG H/D!JaeHo, and girl,
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LOL MABI ILUUUUUUUSM ♥♥♥♥♥

HP!DBSK...I totally read the comments first so I knew it was coming (but from the title I thought it was something Aladdin-ish, wtf XDDD), but seriously. That was brilliant. XD♥♥♥

And no, after reading this I don't think I'll kill you. Because there's YooMin and ZOMG H/D!JaeHo, and girl, <i<you</i>'re the one killing meh 8DDDDDD ♥♥♥♥♥♥

(I'm smitten with that Jae. *w* I feel the love bursting out of my heart for himmmm~)

*loves on you*
*and on slytherin!jae*
*and on everything else*
Hoshi // Simona[info]yaoi_hoshi on January 17th, 2008 06:48 am (UTC)
And don't mind the fact that lately I'm all about html failure, hokay? 8DDD
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 07:03 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 07:01 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]yaoi_hoshi on January 17th, 2008 07:06 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 07:14 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]yaoi_hoshi on January 17th, 2008 07:26 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 11:29 am (UTC)
Sarah[info]rhidana on January 17th, 2008 10:07 am (UTC)
OMG! This was so utterly cute and adorable! It totally made my morning! Yay!
Clueless!Min and sneaky!Chun FTW! *___*
Totally agree to your house placements, too ^^
More please?
Amy: YooChun - Cute[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 11:19 am (UTC)
oh! super weeee! glad i could help in the making of your morning~ :DDD♥ (and you agree with the house choices, nice! though i confess, chun gave me so much trouble there, haha.)

moar? XD well, i might end up writing the prequel, with how the jaeho began, though i fear there won't be much yoomin happening then. D: (maybe a little future!drabble later...?)
solution/resolution/absolution[info]rain_streaked on January 17th, 2008 10:11 am (UTC)
o - omg. ♥ i think i need to get married to this fic. *hearts; dbsk and harry potter. omg.

you should have heard me when i read the "His school robes flair out behind him as he walks out the door, and ChangMin almost gapes at him - damn those Slytherins." part. no actually, it's a good thing you didn't. it was enough to make dogs deaf, seriously.

omg. so much love for you. ♥ god, i am so incoherent.
Amy: JaeHo - Book[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 11:27 am (UTC)
sarah~ :DDD *glomptacklesrollsaroundwith* ♥

you liiiike? :3 *beams*
(zomg, i was so afraid people would hate this so much! as in, "omg dbsk in a hp au? are you crazy woman? what were you thinking!" sort of hate. XD;;;)

*huggles* love you muchly too dear! i'm happy you liked the story! ♥
Rie[info]bitterkoekjes on January 17th, 2008 11:30 am (UTC)
and ChangMin almost gapes at him - damn those Slytherins. *le gasp*

This is the result of that crazy-hp-fics-reading-phase? MELIKES *licks* XDDD

OK, I'M GOING TO CONTINUE READING THIS AWESOME MYCHUN-IS-A-SLYTHERIN-FICCU, WILL BE BACK. :DDDD
Amy: YooChun - 4pics[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 11:43 am (UTC)
yessss~ it is, it is! *glomps* ♥

(and oh, one too many pokes from jewell, trying to get me outta my phase, ahaha.)

zomg, hope you like, bb. even though it is mostly min-centric. XD
(no subject) - [info]bitterkoekjes on January 17th, 2008 11:51 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 11:58 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]bitterkoekjes on January 17th, 2008 12:46 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 01:19 pm (UTC)
claire: text - you make me smile[info]cluvy on January 17th, 2008 05:08 pm (UTC)
ZOMG I am really happy you went HP fics reading and disappeared for a wee bit. Amy, why are you just so awesome? *flails* DBSK as hogwarts students? *brain explodes*
Amy: DBSK/TVXQ - The Dongbang Way[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 05:33 pm (UTC)
oh, oh! O: now that makes me happy! knowing my moment of weakness was well spent, at least. 8DDD

♥ i am extremely happy to introduce you to a better era at hogwarts. one with dbsk on command. mwahaha. >3

*squeezes*
(no subject) - [info]cluvy on January 19th, 2008 05:12 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 19th, 2008 05:37 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]cluvy on January 19th, 2008 07:01 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 19th, 2008 11:29 am (UTC)
Stephanie: dbsk // bonjour paris 2[info]theresa_lynne on January 17th, 2008 05:21 pm (UTC)
OMG. Hahaha. Oh man. I obviously don't know near enough about HP to fully understand this fic, but yay! It was so funny. <3333
Amy: ChangMin - Beauty[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
i'd be more than happy to point you towards some amazing harry/draco stories if you perchance got interested. (tis my hp otp, you see!) 8DDD

and oh, i'm definitely happy you enjoyed the story, bb! my min is now steph!approved. ♥
(no subject) - [info]theresa_lynne on January 17th, 2008 05:55 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 06:54 pm (UTC)
figmagination[info]figmagination on January 17th, 2008 08:31 pm (UTC)
That was so adorable! Thanks for the read!~
Amy: DBSK/TVXQ - The Dongbang Way[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 08:46 pm (UTC)
zomg! glad you enjoyed it~ :D it was fun to write. XD
スベテstyle: Yoochun // 小さい世界[info]mimei on January 17th, 2008 09:13 pm (UTC)
d'aw. minnie is such a dork. junsu is so hungry adorable. jaejoong is such a badass. yunho is so paternal. yoochun is so romantic. i don't even like crossovers but this is so cute, bb, that i couldn't not! ♥
Amy: OT5[info]maryl_z on January 17th, 2008 09:30 pm (UTC)
*sktrly steals one of su's lollipops and gives it to you* ♥

you are a doll~ giving this a chance even though is au and yoomin! *pounces* i am happy you like it, very much so! :DDD

I don't dive, I cannonball: diana. says dangyunhagi.[info]bythehorns on January 17th, 2008 10:56 pm (UTC)
aww. i really enjoyed this dbsk @ hogwarts crossover, and i'm not even an hp fan.
your dense min was <3. but soccer-loving-muggle-born Junsu is just too cute.
Amy: JunSu - 4pics[info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 12:04 am (UTC)
that is a delight to know, bb. ♥ i'm happy you gave the story a try and enjoyed it even though the setting isn't your favorite! :DDD

...and i just couldn't avoid making junsu muggle-born. he wouldn't set for quidditch, you know? the boy loves his soccer way too much. XD

btw hun, you were the one interested in a pair of earrings like mine, y/y? i finally managed to find another one! 8D would you like me to send it to you? i need your address if so~ :")))
(no subject) - [info]bythehorns on January 18th, 2008 12:07 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 12:28 am (UTC)
love is delicious // and so is Changmin ♥: changmin // fuck me[info]jaemint on January 18th, 2008 03:02 am (UTC)
adjklrajka
ajdked
akdoeq/a;f

ILUSM. ♥
Amy: ChangMin[info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 03:54 am (UTC)
zomg! *blushes* thank you... 8D♥?
紫のチャンミン: YooMin in Paris[info]kurogoma on January 18th, 2008 03:38 am (UTC)

this is such a fun read!
changmin is so uptight sometimes, yet manages to be so adorable even when he is so.
i do feel alittle sorry for him when i read the bit about the poll, i wouldn't like it if someone did that to me, or give me knowing smirks all the time...
jae and chun were rather naughty here XD

but i am glad min finally got it, because yoomin is just so sweet.

and i love junsu. ::huggles::
he is so cute and a really good friend.

^^
Amy: YooMin[info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 03:49 am (UTC)
oh, thank you so much! you don't know absolutely perfect it is to know that this is a fun story. ♥ it really is all i wanted, with this crazy au here. XD

but oh! you forgot leaderssi~ O: *is a total yunho fangirl* XDDD

zomg, i take you agreed with the house placements? ;D junsu as a hufflepuff was mighty enjoyable to write! such a cutie~
flip_reverse[info]flip_reverse on January 18th, 2008 06:18 am (UTC)
ahh~ loved this~
i did a double take when slytherin was mentioned xD but omg fandoms collide!
love cutely oblivious changmin. ehe. and they say he's smart.
Amy: ChangMin - Beauty[info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 06:53 am (UTC)
i'm glad i managed to surprise you! *see me being all sneaky 8D* i hope you had a fun time reading this. ♥

and oh, changmin is smart, except perhaps when he's being too stubborn (and a bit afraid) to see things for what they really are. XD
ttaejoong_hyuk[info]ttaejoong_hyuk on January 18th, 2008 06:49 am (UTC)
aaahhh!!! soooo cute!!!! took me a while to notice the harry potter references...ehehe...this story is really good! and an oblivious changmin with a sly yoochun makes it even better!!!! and with a little jaeho and junsu on the side to help changmin figure it all out makes it the cutest!
Amy: YooChun - Cute[info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 06:57 am (UTC)
ah, thank you! i was trying to be sneaky about the setting of the story, so no worries if you only got it after a few moments. ;3 (see, i was afraid of the reactions i was going to get, haha.)

i'm happy you enjoyed it though. ♥ it was nice trying to imagine the houses the boys were going to be placed in. yoochun gave me much trouble, i can honestly say. 8D;;;
~♥Hope to the End. Always Keep the Faith♥~[info]chloe1910 on January 18th, 2008 09:56 am (UTC)
Holy wizardy!! This is awesome!

Yoomin is not really my favourite but I think their pairing here is rather interesting.....and I love the Jae, Yunho and Junsu's cameos...
Amy: YunHo - B&W[info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 01:28 pm (UTC)
i'm happy you gave this story a chance, even with yoomin not being your favorite pairing! :D and i'm delighted you ended up liking it. ♥
(no subject) - [info]chloe1910 on January 19th, 2008 06:49 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 19th, 2008 11:28 am (UTC)
ara_niey[info]ara_niey on January 18th, 2008 10:56 am (UTC)
awww~min was so innocent!
and chunnie..romantic as always~♥
Amy: JaeJoong - Orange Pretty[info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 01:30 pm (UTC)
oh, that he was! and a bit stubborn - he just didn't want to see the truth. ;D

i think yoochun tried for romance (in a smirking, slytherin way), but i do agree with changmin here. if only he'd gone with the chocolate idea... XD

Jennifer[info]mrsedjack on January 18th, 2008 08:37 pm (UTC)
WARNING: DEATH THREAT HERE:

You are bloody amazing, you know that? Dong Bang Shin Ki combined with Harry Potter, it doesn't get any better than that. Only thing that makes me want to skin you alive (noticed the death threat? xD) is that you've half-converted me to YooMin now. I will not stand for it! I'm JaeMin through and through!

But really, made me crack up just after reading a few lines. ^^ ♥
Amy: YooMin[info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 09:07 pm (UTC)
my first death threat! O: zomg, and you were commenter #69, obviously, you are spechul! 8DDD

...i will not apologize for converting you! *puts on brave face* you can't scare me, nononono~ *hides*

8D;;

zomg, bb. thank you for the compliment. *bows* i'm happy you enjoyed the story and had fun reading it~! ♥ and no worries about the jaemin/yoomin. in a fangirl's heart there's always a little space for another pairing. ;3 (*cough* and i'm sure mim would be more than willing to have both jae and chun. XD)
(no subject) - [info]mrsedjack on January 18th, 2008 09:17 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 09:40 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]mrsedjack on January 18th, 2008 09:46 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]maryl_z on January 18th, 2008 10:09 pm (UTC)
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\(・ㅈ・)/[info]blue__nek0 on January 19th, 2008 02:01 am (UTC)
XD based on the title I thought this was an Aladdin-ish fic (Kyuhyun is still my ultimate Korean Aladdin though ♥)

...I should have read this earlier TTT_TTT Dong Bang Potter OMG. I thought Min was a Gryffindor until the ending xD He's always been a Gryffinclaw anyway 8Db

I'm sorry this comment is so spazzy... It's just so... fun... and relieving, from reading Romeo & Juliet in Old English. -_____-;;
Amy: YooMin[info]maryl_z on January 19th, 2008 02:14 am (UTC)
oh, bb. i don't mind your spazzy comment at all. i'm actually very happy to have received it, since i needed a pick me up like this. ;D

if i managed to live you confused up till the end, them my job is done. XDDD i wanted it to be pretty vague in certain areas so it'd be as much as surprise as possible!

this is definitely a different read from romeo&juliet, haha, so i'm delighted you had fun with it. ♥
hangeng4ever[info]hangeng4ever on June 5th, 2008 10:08 am (UTC)
aw, this is cute and wholesome i <3 it. :) make some more yoomin plz *big eyes*
Amy: YunHo - Heart[info]maryl_z on June 7th, 2008 06:56 pm (UTC)
thanks, hun. wish i had more time to write, but lately... it's been difficult. :|

i promised myself i'd get back to writing during my vacation though, so i guess that's something to look forward to? XD
b to the i to the g (bang bang)  ★彡: Yunho ¤ Suave[info]flufy_umbreon on July 29th, 2008 09:13 pm (UTC)
I know this is quite an old fic but I just stumbled on your lj and and and --

Harry Potter Dong Bang! (and good hp dong bang at that!) ♥♥

Slytherin!Jaechun and and Jae bewitching the ceiling to show a Quidditch pitch and ahhh my life is complete :D ♥
Amy: YunHo - Heart[info]maryl_z on August 9th, 2008 04:09 pm (UTC)
it is quite an old fic! XD and this is quite the late reply~ i swear i told myself i'd answer sooner, but i haven't been to lj much, lately.

but! it's awesome to know this weird AU of mine still can gather some attention. ;D i'm happy to know you enjoyed the story! i love dbsg, and hp, and it's nice to know a fellow fan. 8D

there's been a somewhat-sequence in the works for a while now but i'm not sure when i'll be able to post it. it's a "in the future" thing. but, if you're interested, pop by from time to time. i haven't been posting but... i'm still alive, haha.

and sorry for this late (and long) reply. bye, bye~
 
 

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